it's a good poem. lots of people think some of their poems are cheesy while other people have different opinions of them. that's how i feel about a lot of the things i write.

anyway, i liked it. very well-written.

i wish i could write a better review to hopefully brighten up your day...but i can't think of anything! *whimpers*

that wasnt cheesy, it was sweet and simple. i really liked it.

Nice, points out the fact that love is never perfect. Love is like a rose, beautiful and enjoyed by all, but as one gets close enough they ar let down by the pain of the thorns that metephorically (sp?) are the other person and all of the things that makes love not eternal. ^_^ Keep your perspective and writing technigue.