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| Smoky Bear 2003-05-27 ch 1, | wow dude... see what i mean about you touching on deep stuff when you stay away from love poetry... this is great. you held the pace and the rhythm is neat. your rhymes played together nicely especially at the beginnig. and to top it off, your bloody right too!! :-) xbearx |