well, aside from the fact that I am no longer smiling, this is pretty good. Like it. I shall come back and re-read it when I am depressed later tonight. :)

I really like your poetry, it all reads like song lyrics... and it obviously has a lot of emotion behind it. keep writing _

I never told . . .

I love the last stanza, excellent. Really well done. Loads of emotion. i feel for you. I know how that goes. really really well done. sos

i like. very cool.

Where did that come from? This has anger management written all over it, .

Faith

Jeez.. I hope I'm not Candy Poison Girl.

XD Anyways, the writing was intense, kind of like you knew and was talking right at someone who stole your boyfriend(or girlfriend). Anyways, it was good. A worthwhile read.