 Mistress K. Darq-Chylde 2004-09-10 . chapter 1Sounds like me in my down moods. Very true. However... sometimes it's better to hurt than feel nothing at all because you're afraid...
Trust me, I know. However... hurting someone else is no fun. It's gonna happen sooner or later, I suppose... |
 TheatrePhunk 2004-01-21 . chapter 1You're not alone! You have me! -huggles- This is sad... Did something happen to make you write that? Hope you feel better now (especially since it's been about 8 months)! |
 Kowski 2003-07-31 . chapter 1dude, i feel like this all the time. well, this is going on my faves list, cuz i like a poem i can relate to XD |
 Cryptic Insanity 2003-06-24 . chapter 1-hoots and hollers- I really like this, especcially the last three lines. You are a very good writer! And it's something new to read what a guy writes, instead of just girls =) |
 Michelus 2003-05-25 . chapter 1I don't know why, but after reading several of these poems at FP, I can truly say I am a huge fan of poems now. This was great, I can relate to that sense of lost. Sometimes I feel like that when I am eating lunch by myself. With no friends to sit with, I can't help to feel like that. A sad poem for me, but shows me your a good poet. The rhyming was good too!
Michelus |
 BlueDragon11 2003-05-25 . chapter 1*sniffles* Dat's kinda depressing...but sometimes I feel like that...not that often, once in a blue moon, maybe. GREAT job, though, it was well written and flowed quite well. |
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