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Reviews For: Hollow and Alone

Mistress K. Darq-Chylde
2004-09-10
ch 1,
Sounds like me in my down moods. Very true. However... sometimes it's better to hurt than feel nothing at all because you're afraid...
Trust me, I know. However... hurting someone else is no fun. It's gonna happen sooner or later, I suppose...
TheatrePhunk
2004-01-21
ch 1,
You're not alone! You have me! -huggles- This is sad... Did something happen to make you write that? Hope you feel better now (especially since it's been about 8 months)!
Kowski
2003-07-31
ch 1,
dude, i feel like this all the time. well, this is going on my faves list, cuz i like a poem i can relate to XD
Cryptic Insanity
2003-06-24
ch 1,
-hoots and hollers- I really like this, especcially the last three lines. You are a very good writer! And it's something new to read what a guy writes, instead of just girls =)
Michelus
2003-05-25
ch 1,
I don't know why, but after reading several of these poems at FP, I can truly say I am a huge fan of poems now. This was great, I can relate to that sense of lost. Sometimes I feel like that when I am eating lunch by myself. With no friends to sit with, I can't help to feel like that. A sad poem for me, but shows me your a good poet. The rhyming was good too!

Michelus
BlueDragon11
2003-05-25
ch 1,
*sniffles* Dat's kinda depressing...but sometimes I feel like that...not that often, once in a blue moon, maybe. GREAT job, though, it was well written and flowed quite well.
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