"If you can take can unjust abuse from loved ones" - is the second 'can' supposed to be there? Otheriwse, the poem is fine.I've read "If", but only after hearing it read as a main inspiration for a missionary... ~L.E.~

Very good, not that angsty type feminism.

hehe, that was really good! good advice as well. it made up my mind about something... anyways, yeh. very nice.
(PS - I'm a pesco vegetarian too, i'm sure you really wanted to know that)

That was pure woman and I love it!

I think you captured the essence of a woman and besides which, the technical side of the poem is very sophisticated. I like the every other line rhyming.

nice, i like that. very good...well, um...lesson? theme? yeah, you get the point. well done!

Very good! This is an excellent poem. I like how it flows, and all the advice that's put in there. I esp. like the part about the curry.^^

How sweet! I love the last line, even if I haven't read "If" yet! I think this suits fp.net fine; the poem can definatly stand it's own. Good Job!

great poem! lol, pretty funny, i like this! nice advice :P good job on this. keep on writing!

Yeah, it captures the feel of Kipling's 'If'... very nice... feminist too... ^_^

~Isay

Well written, good job there. I thik you've kept to the rhyming pattern quite nicely myself.
Anyway, great piece of work.

I really like this poem. Its an inspiration for everyone. Like the idea of keeping Kipling's rhyming scheme - very original. :o) Well done.


Liz.