this is great! it flowed so smoothly and rhymed great! :)

Excellent poem. This was so meaningful. And it flowed so well, the rhyme was perfect. Great job, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*

That's a really interesting out look on death. Very thoought provoking. Great Job! You should write more.

Ek!! Wow!! I like very much. This is very good.