It's good! Please update? We loved what you've got so far!

Great plotline, but I wonder if the lady's really nice...or is she evil?? *hugs* more story-ness please!@ *holds out reading glasses*

This story is really good. Will she find her friends on that island? I think that she'll find them and she will bring them back, but you never know thats what happens in a lot of storys.

More chapters would be nice.

Very nice, good start...um, read the second chapter too, but I'm too lazy. ^^;;
-A+B

Great chapter. Honestly, I haven't a clue as to what will happen next. I'm already completely baffled as to what is the story behind the woman and everything. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Yep, you did ask nicely for reviews, so here it goes. = ) First, I think this story has wonderful potential, if you go with it right. It's a good idea, and I'm really curious how it's going to develop. I think this is written well, but (this is SOLELY my opinion, so don't read too much into it) it feels as though the narrator is relating the whole incident of the sinking a little too calmly. Is it kind of like she's in shock or something? I don't know, it just came off a little too mild to me.
Anywho, I didn't intend for this too a flame, because I truly did like this story, and I eagerly wait for more. Update soon!

Dose this make you happy ? I really liked your story ! Please update really fast. I'll tell my friends to read this so you can , get it up faster. O and if you can , can you please read one of my stories. I bet you'll get plenty of reviews, cause this story rules !
-Destin Scar