Reviews for Once and Future Queen

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DarK-FreEdoM 2008-04-16 ch 14,	abuseI dont think I have read a story this good in a long while. I like the fact that it has its moments of tragdy and grief, brings a little more.. well something good to the story. Can't wait to read more :) *DarK-FreEdoM
BrownEyedBeauty 2008-03-31 ch 16,	abuseBeautiful story. Excellent writing. Very enjoyable to read. Sad ending though, but works so well with the story. Thank you! :D
admit it.you luv me 2008-03-15 ch 16,	abuseOMFG...this story was good! It really was
paradiie 2007-12-27 ch 16,	abusei love the ending. it's so tragically perfect.
paradiie 2007-12-27 ch 5,	abusethat's so ** sad. gah!! but i guess it would be boring if they had ended up together.
paradiie 2007-12-27 ch 1,	abusei like how you incorporated greek myths into your story. it's so awesome!
glamoureste 2007-10-01 ch 16,	abuseoh my goodness... that was the freaking most cutest best everything good story EVER! that sentence really doesn't make sense... but... i seriously can't explain how amazing this story was. yes, tragic ending with some happiness. :]] at least feodor and eldoris were together.. ah... this story was so good. the ending made me cry like crazy. NOW!! off to read the sequal and smite Kalonice! yay!
X-Romantic-X 2007-09-22 ch 6,	abuseaw, i wanted her to marry isadore :(
saccharinecancer 2007-08-20 ch 9, anon.	abuseOK, now I'm VERY sure you've read Queen Of Camelot by Nancy McKenzie. If I'm wrong then...oops? Anyways, no insults intended if I have implied anything(I'm not saying I did...). Like it so far!
sUmM3R43terNIt33 2007-08-08 ch 16,	abusei really love ur story n hope that u write more greek myth or whatever n i hope ur grandpa gets better...stay strong and all the best...
bee 2007-07-17 ch 7, anon.	abusewow. now i know why the plot seemed familiar. chapter six was such an in-your-face ripoff of nancy mckenzie's "child queen". and once i realized that, i noticed all the other things that miraculously followed the book. chapter six was almost exactly the same wedding night, and eldoris finds someone wounded while riding her horse, and she falls in love with someone she can't have - isiodore. if you want to write about something that's already been written, put it on fanfiction where it belongs!
Genato 2007-05-24 ch 16,	abusethis is really good. i almost cried when feodor was dying.. although the words were meaningful.. you should've lessen the words.. i mean.. he's dying.. but other than that.. i like this although i was surprised at the ending.. where will she 'be strong'? i mean.. they lived happily.. after the kalonice person left. sigh can't wait for the sequel! keep on writing!
Lady Mei of Darkness 2007-05-10 ch 16,	abuseNU! They all died! Oh well. You're right. The ending wasn't that bad, but I am still quite sad that they all died. Now I will go read the sequel! WOOHOO!!
Lady Mei of Darkness 2007-05-10 ch 1,	abuseI LOVE IT LOTS! huggles Yes well your control of language, sentence structure, and grammar is very good, as well as the emotions that you portray in your writing! Very well written.
ANGEL992210 2007-03-17 ch 1,	abuseSIMPLY AMAZING.

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