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| Werecat99 2003-12-27 ch 1,   | Short, but very beautiful. Good work. |
| aleppine 2003-07-07 ch 1, | Something about 'the clouds are heavy, the air is dry' really grabs me. It's so perfect. It's the best line of the poem, in my opinion. The image is captured well with a handful of choice words. Good stuff :D Isn't being nocturnal the greatest thing? Hehehe. |
| Plato's Optic Runaway 2003-06-14 ch 1, | simply amazing! your penname makes me laugh every bloody time i read it...heh...making me laugh is quite a task. this is great! i'm nocturnal too. |
| tropical kisses 2003-06-09 ch 1, | hey! i luv this! keep writin ^_^ |
| greenfroggies 2003-06-08 ch 1, | i LOVE the last line! Actually, i love all of it. Amazing poem. |
| RavenPhoenix 2003-06-03 ch 1, | this is really nice :):) keep up the great work :):) i like it a lot lots of nice imagery :):) RavenPhoenix |
| cosmo-queen 2003-06-01 ch 1, | Excellent poem with very good imagery. I also love the night. Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |
| midnight dreams 2003-05-30 ch 1, | cool. :) i saw the mo...n. ^^ eheheh...it's yellow. ^^ i dunno if the other readers saw a white one. ^^ Wonderful imagery. *nods* a very good poem, i must say. ^^ Thank you for the review, btw. It is greatly appreciated. ^^ *pats your back* |
| Lady B.V Rose 2003-05-30 ch 1, | Ah...nighttime, it's just refreshing, if it wasn't for stupid school and family I would only be awake at night...*blissful sigh and dreamy look* *cookie* "Rose chick don't go having a chicka fit!" - Me x Nicole x |
| DeepDown 2003-05-29 ch 1, | wow, love some of the phrases in there, specially - lone wolf greets the glistening moon. cool... keep it up! -DeepDown |
| kamikaze899 2003-05-29 ch 1, | cool poem! short and to the point. made me imagine a full moon.. great job, keep writing ^^ |
| Taffy 2003-05-28 ch 1, | this is good, i like the way you describe the night so well. sounds as though it should be longer or that its a small part of a larger work possibly a song or maybe that just me other than that i really like this (going to have to read more of your stuff now), keep up the good work taffy |
| Cirien Phoenix 2003-05-27 ch 1, | I love the night. I also appreciate your review for my poem. I think the night is very beautiful and you have captured it with strong imagery. ~Cirien Phoenix |
| Aureya of Chocolate 2003-05-27 ch 1, | oh very good nice imagery i like descriptive poetry, i wish i was better at it lotsa luv jazzo ps thanx for reviewing me! |
| Rosie Blackwood 2003-05-26 ch 1, | very powerful language. i love your word choice. i also love your metaphors. very cool poem. ~rosie |