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| Mrs. Stardust Ukitsu 2008-11-05 ch 1,   | Simple and really beautiful. Good job. -Stardust. |
| Werecat99 2003-06-30 ch 1, | I just loved this! Perfection in simplicity. And the last two lines were inspired. |
| Pierced 2003-06-05 ch 1, | quite intimate and beautiful. I really really love the last two lines... the only thing I wasn't crazy about was the whole "my love" thing... it just sounds a bit corny to me... but that's just me, I'm sure, and the way you used it in your poem made it not as bad. |
| Sarah Yearwood 2003-05-26 ch 1, | Very clever. Well written. It's excellent. Thnx for reviewing my little passage thingy. Thnx for giving you're opinion, but I'll be reviewing some of your other stuff, and please don't be mad if they come out offensive. It's what I'm all about. It's just as good to me if you find it offensive and disgusting as if you would find it good and NOT revolting. Blood and Life, Vampiress Marietta |
| Soupaflyyy 2003-05-26 ch 1, | Wow! I loved that. Especially the last line. That was perfect. Excellent job! |