 Dirty Wallpaper 2004-02-18 . chapter 1nice work. ja, i definitely think i see the double meaning, though not precisely what you are trying to convey me thinks. maybe it implied they are always making mistakes, therefore always sorry? or maybe always feeling sorry for themself? meh, anyways, im not here to ponder im here to review. very simple, very abrupt, loaded with impact, definitely an artform i like. great work here, me liked muchly. kudos! |
 Smoky Bear 2003-05-27 . chapter 1ok, i saw this yesterday it got me thinking. it's an intriguing poem. is this about a one sided relationship in which one person says sorry all the time, even if its not neccessarily their fault? i thought the last two lines to be sarcastic and bitter, portraying how ** off this person is at having to apologise... hence it's not really an apology... or am i way way off mark... a little insight if you wouldn't mind :-) good job, very provoking... |