This shows really good techneque. Awesome job!

Wow! This blew me away. I love the picture you paint with your words. They evoke complex emotions. This juxaposes the title of the poem "Simple Things" and therefor deepens the meaning.

I like the discususion of love in this poem as a "Simple Thing" yet it is actually a complex emotion. I love the layers you have woven in. This shows a high level of talent for someone so young. Keep up the good work!

hey. wonderful poem! nicely written, very true. very sweet, beautiful. great message also. you did a good job on this! keep on writing! and thanks for your review. i'm glad to meet another Christian here. i don't know much about the band Avalon, i just knew that song from a praise night i had at my church. thanks for the suggestion though. yeah, it is also a nice song. anyway, thanks again.