wow, that is all i have to say.

great story/ plot.

Loved the characters - very intense.

If there were to be a sequel - i'd TOTALLY read it. :)

enjoyed the ending and wish there was more. :D

Ok, also just wanted to ask...how the hell did you write this in only 5 months?!?!?! it seems so well thought out and the sequence and the cliff hangers and everything is all so perfect. Sigh; am very much in awe as well as profusely jealous, lol. Have you ever thought of adding an epilogue to your epilogue about life after the baby comes? I guess I'm just too obsessed with this story, lol.

Ok, so I've read this story numerous times and never reviewed and now feel extremely guilty. I simply LOVED it. The minutest details of the story are what intrigued me the most. I loved the way you described Jerry making his bed and the voluminous nightgown Scribe had to wear on their first night together. Even the quality of the sandwich that he forced her to eat!! I have to agree with a lot of the reviewers who said that it disturbed their feminist sensibilities but at the same time the chemistry between Jerry and Scribe was explosive and I couldn't help but fall in love with them more and more as the story progressed. Sorry for such a long review (now you know why I avoid writing them, lol). But it was simply amazing. I'm reading Beach Fantasy right now and am quite enamored with that one as well!!

Although I'm not entirely sure how much you care, you spelled astonishment wrong in this chapter. Round about the place where it says "Her hands have dropped, and clenched against her side, and she's staring down at him with a a look of almost wounded astonishment." That's the one. Not trying to be a nitpick(I promise), but I thought you should know!

Have a great day!

Hey so that was intense! It's very interesting that you chose a modern parallel of the Roman myth--Romulus and his crowd kidnapping Sabine women to continue their line. Some of this made the feminist in me really upset, but w/e. Well-written!

OMG THIS WAS AN AMAZING STORY. I need to find me a Jerry just like him, I mean firsdt P.S. I Love You and her Jerry is fantastic and then this story and so is yours...it makes a girl wanna go after every guy named Jerry she see's. But anyway enough of my babbling it was an amazing story and you should never stop writing!


Love and Peace,
Bubbles

no sequel?

I loved absolutely every single second of this. From start to finish. This is going on my favourites right now!

LOVE THE STORY..SEQUEL PRETTY PLEASE..

Great story :)

This story was absolutely AMAZING! I am totally in love with your Scribe and Jerry. I mean WOW...I am speechless. What I can say is I am beyond happy that I found your story. KUDOS!

the ending's so da*n cute!

I LOVE this story! I mean it totally freaking rocks! James got what he deserved, I loved the little boys more than you can imagine and I think Scribe should have at least socked Jerry for making her wait so bloody long. I absolutely loved loved this story!

Great story!