everything i've said a million times before. lol. continue, please!Brooke Monroe

*begs* MORE! PLEASE!

Ok. You have to add more to this! Now! Write now! Lol, sorry - I love this story. It's one of the best I've seen on here. I'm probably exageratting a little bit, but not very much, it really is great.

How do you get personal space at the top of the page. you'd think you'd get more reviews too. one for the position and two you're story. but you didnt, shame

Oh, fun! I have been browsing all day and I'm happy I stumbled across this little story. You've got a great beginning here!

Actually *sheepish grin* your writing style is a lot like mine, so it was a little weird to be reading this . . . and I don't really want to comment on it. LOL I'll content myself with saying it's very good, has caught my interest, I like Krista's character, and I hope you continue! _

ja ne,

LoK

Wow!

Great stuff...but I seem to be saying that a lot with your writing!

Anyway, you got me hooked on this story and I hope I dont have to wait too long for you to update it!

Spawny

Still livin' it. (and this time I really AM going to tell Kristen) I forgot last time.

Nice little story you got going here. I suspect action will pick up in the coming posts, so I'm looking forward to the next update. Return the favor:

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Great story! I was wondering if you can review my story called Earth is under attack. Thanks!

Bye

oh, you've definately got my attention here _

WOW! It's like a knife to the heart! (bad choice of words) I loved it. I'll be looking forward to an update. I'd say something more inteligent but I'm still in shock.