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zagato 2003-11-07 ch 9,	Great story! I love how things worked out. This may seem a bit similar to Once Upon a Time by kates in fanfiction.com. Good work! Please write more.
TheTiramisuOfImpendingDoom 2003-09-11 ch 9,	:glomps Lucyn. Margaret glares at me: ANYWHO... I liked this. I'm not really confused at the plot or anything. I'm just sad that it's over. :*(
Nichole Sedai 2003-06-23 ch 9,	Well, I'm not completely lost. Not any more than I am in the other story, which is not much now. I will be curious to know how that came to be in the other story, but I am content to wait. I liked it. Good work! I have a paper due technically in 25 minutes, so I really have to get working on that now. Sorry.
kitty 2003-06-09 ch 9,	Nice twist at the end! It summed everything up very nicely. I think that Margaret should have ventured around the fairy world for a while before she got married though. It would be kind of strange to become queen of a land before you even get to explore. But over all it was a great story!
naughty little munchkin 2003-06-07 ch 9,	hey there... ok sorry, but i have to admit that i AM kinda stumped. lol! sorry! but its true :) i guess i'll take u're advice and read u're other stories... but only wen i've got more time! n e way, i'm disappointed that this story ended so soon... but its nice to know that at least ONE story i've read on this site has an ending :) or at least a 'semi ending'...ok i'm rambling. the wedding that u described was really pretty and a very satisfying scene... a nice conclusion. n e way, well done on such a wonderful story and i look forward to reading more of u're work :) luv, nadia :P
naughty little munchkin 2003-06-07 ch 8,	u are seriously the fastest updater that i have yet come across! and i really like it! lol! that way i don't forget the story b4 i have begun :) n e way, this was another beautiful chapter... i'm so glad that she's met Lucyn again! but even so, there's some sort of trouble underlying their meeting isn't there? i got that impression in the very last line... ah well, i guess i'll hafta wait and see! on with chapter 9! luv, nadia
bunny 2003-06-06 ch 9,	yeah, open ended stories are great. Except 'The Giver'. I hope that story forever burns in the fiery depths of h- you know what I mean. Then, to make it worse, it won a newberry award! Whoever handed out that award must have been smokin something..., and now, to end this review in a incredible, original, 'bunny', way, I'll sing a song. to the theme of spider-man Spider Goat, Spider Goat, does whatever a spider won't, spins a web! eat some cheese, he's the only goat, who can climb trees, BA DA! here comes the Spider Goat! chromatic scale second theme at the speed of cheese, he arrives with a crash, he eats potatoes, but only if there're mashed! chromatic scale BA, DA, BA DA!
Crystal Teardrop 2003-06-05 ch 9,	Um, i know you've gotten amazing reviews from a lot of people for this story (including me, earlier), but i have to say that i dislike the way you ended. To me, you ended in the middle of the lead-up action. There was no conflict, no plot. I love the writing style, but there was nothing to read. Him being betrothed to someone else and her running away and then finding that it's him is not a plot conflict. It's the lead-up action. There was no climax, no other interesting side plots/conflicts. So, i'll try some of your other stories, but i must say that i was entirely disappointed with the way you ended this.
Raija D. 2003-06-04 ch 9,	YOU GOT MARRIED! YOU...SON OF A GUN! DAUGHTER OF A GLOCK! Muahhahaha! Queen of the faeries! All Hail Asriya! bow down to her, for she is a fairy. Queen. Hahhaa. Fairy queen. Fairy and Queen. Like bellarmine...X_X and it wasn't real?! not in the real real unreal sense?! gasp! You could have left your reviewers in peace, but no! Had to go link it back to somethign else! Just because it did happen... AW, hints of desperation "And you know I love you..." breaks into song I WILL ALWAYS LOVE YOU-O! hahahha! That loveyness was sickening! SICKENING! YOU WON'T SEE ME ACTING LIKE THAT WITH...ANYBODY! But good story overall, like the details, good 3-d characterization.
Leah Claire 2003-06-04 ch 9,	I agree about open ended endings. I mean, my favorite book "Fire and Hemlock" is sort of like that and people are going on all the time about how it confused them and they don't know what really happened. That's the POINT. If it were spelled out any more clearly it would lose some of the magic. Anyway, I didn't think your ending was too hard to understand. But I am, after all, accustomed to using my brain in stories. I'll have to try Land of a Thousand Names. It sounds interesting. I tried your "Adaela" one but I couldn't get into it. Every considered revising the first couple of chapters? I think you're quite a good writer (and prolific, too!) and someday I'll probably start reading a book and think "this sounds familiar!" and realize that it's your story.
EmNight87 2003-06-04 ch 9,	This was an awesome story. I guess I'll have to go back and read The Land of a Thousand Names. Great job!
starrynight04 2003-06-04 ch 9,	confused...
kitty 2003-06-03 ch 8,	yeah, Lucyn is kinda what i thought he was. i still don't understand why he looked troubled when he first saw the ring aroud Margaret's neck though, since he gave it to her and all.
Leah Claire 2003-06-02 ch 8,	O. In faery land. I wonder how Lucyn singled her out? Lucky Margaret. I don't think I'd be particularly un happy that the uncle couldn't come.
Zackire 2003-06-01 ch 8,	an interesting twist

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