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| silentscreamer07 2005-12-21 ch 1,   | MWA HAHAHA! yes! one bunny down, 18 million ka trillion to go! mwa haha! I liked this poem, that could also do something to do with the fact that i think all bunnies are evil and they are out to get us, they first decieve us tho, with their fuzzy tails, and little noses. So..YAY for this poem. loved the line.."blasted bunny bits" Im odd and strange but thats otay, this is goin on my favs :P *kw* ~george aka britney~ |
| Wesley Storm 2005-08-02 ch 1, | hmm... definately unique though slightly confusing. Did the bunny purposely hop into the road to get hit by a car? I didn't find it exactly humorous though I don't know what category this could have been put in. I think you've created a writing format all of your own and for that I applaud you. |
| crazy-lady141 2004-12-27 ch 1, | Poor Bunny. I don't get it. Well I think I understood the obliterated and blasted parts. Well I am very slow. It shall dawn on me in time. :) |
| Amber Cradle 2003-08-06 ch 1, | is this really poetry? I don't think so...also, it's in the category of humor...so why am i not laughing? |
| VampireGrapes 2003-06-18 ch 1, | There is something deliciously wonderful about a poem involving "Blasted Bunny Bits" being included in the humor section. I love it. >=) |
| pennamessuck 2003-06-18 ch 1, | cool. We like that whole bunny thing -Jack, Aldo, Ben, and PJ (The Dynamic...uh...Quartet of Pennamessuck Inc.) |
| Zainab 2003-06-05 ch 1, | Bunny! Creative idea. Titles can be deceiving!(sp?) Good line structure |
| kILLeRgOtH156 2003-05-30 ch 1, | The funniest poems are dead pan, change the category. I suggest changing the summary so you don't give away the twist in the end. "Blasted Bunny Bits" . . . :-) |
| Zephyr 2003-05-29 ch 1, | ohh! that's not funny... it's sad. poor bunnies. ~Zephyr |