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| Safety Canary 2008-01-17 ch 1,   | Hell yeah! |
| scuttlebutt 2006-07-22 ch 1, | Liked it. Reminded me of one of my friends, who happens to embrace the -black-woman-in-your-face stereotype. She's awesome. Anyway, this poem, instead of being timid, bitter etc it's empowering and that I-take-no-crap-from-anyone-and-I'll-do-it-with-my-hand-in-your-face attitude. Proud, and confident. Loved it. And while I'm a small, fragile thing, I can still relate. I just had to look a little harder. |
| xONicholeOx 2006-03-02 ch 1, | i love it almost like my life |
| aphroditeseyes 2006-01-01 ch 1, | I LOVE IT! espesh the last two lines ;) |
| LilLaTLuv 2004-12-07 ch 1, | Hey! Love this! I'm a size ten and I get plenty of guys checking me out. So they can go wear their too skinny crap and good luck to them. But when you're only skin and bones, how long are you going to live, really? Size six my foot. No real person should have to have to diet so hard just to get down to that size. Very good theme and I loved the poem. Well written. Keep it up! Luv ya,Tashi :) |
| Wesley The Dark Prince 2004-09-08 ch 1, | Yeah Fat Bottomed girls make the world go round. The title alone interested me, and the poem was good. Humurous(sp) and witty and easy to read. Oh why can't the entire world be like that? |
| cooperduchovny 2003-12-12 ch 1, | Love this! |
| Hero Hydro 2003-12-12 ch 1, | This is very good! I really enjoyed reading this piece work. I get so sick of seeing twig like girls, who think they're "fat". Thank you so much for putting the emotions into words so well. Great job!! |
| quasigeek 2003-06-15 ch 1, | I love your poem! I can totally relate to it. It's going straight to my "favorites" list ^.~ -Hitori |
| Brenna 2003-05-30 ch 1, | I LOVE IT! |
| aceinit 2003-05-29 ch 1, | You rock, chica! |
| Kay Harlow 2003-05-26 ch 1, | That was an awesome poem. It was very unique and different than most of the poems on this site, which are mostly angst-ridden poem. Your poem had this take-charge empowering life to it, with a lot of backbone tons of poems these days lack. You did an awesome job with this poem. Keep writing! |