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| Getuie 2003-12-26 ch 1,   | *sits dumbstruck* This was breathtaking. SO SO SO sad. It's hard to admit ones own failures. At first, when I began reading, I thought I would comment on the style... In the beginning, it kinda bothered me that you didn't use stanzas... but, as I started getting drawn into the poem and the content... this was very well written. It shows the emotion and confusion and heartache and the simple way of saying goodbye beautifully. |
| avidelecteur 2003-11-08 ch 1, | Your ending is perfect. It's very beautiful and emotional. The way you wrote it gets your feelings across really well. And it's a unique subject, too, so that's another point in your favor. |
| Kyalia 2003-05-30 ch 1, | A little sad, but still good. |