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orangesandmoons 2008-04-10 ch 11,	T.T so sad at the end, but I guess this kind of stuff does happen in real life... It's very bittersweet, and Jomei is adorable! Maybe though...you should change the genre thing that says "humor" to "angst"
NOTPOSTING 2006-05-14 ch 11,	o, you must update!!
Ashes' to dust 2006-02-08 ch 1,	Awesome story, I love this so much! Keep up the good work
xanthofile 2005-06-02 ch 9,	is this over? no more updates? please?
lilylupin7 2005-02-10 ch 11,	Aw. Kinda sad but still a nice write
Etheral suicide 2004-02-15 ch 9,	oh..update plz!
Cybeleflame 2003-11-28 ch 9,	well whats going to happen...i noticed you haven't updated in a while...well i hope this review prompts you to update becuase i'm putting it on my favorites.
Lithiium 2003-10-10 ch 7,	chapter 7 was totally awsome Crush-san! although I would have to say chapter 6 sucked big time! See yas! -Lithium
Elina 2003-08-11 ch 5,	Perfection.
City Lights Burn Like Stars 2003-08-04 ch 5,	i like it i love it i want some more of it^^ update soon
Bri! 2003-07-28 ch 5,	nah! great guys! u guys always have very very good ideas!! i unno how u think this stuffs up @_@ i luvs the story guys!~ and its very easy to read...u no what i mean??@_o...erm...it doesnt confuse the crap outta me!! there we go~ thats what i was trying to say...which is good ^_~ but i luved it to pieces~ so u guys keep up the good work ..like always! huggs thumbsup
FamousOneLiners 2003-07-27 ch 5,	this is sappy, yet i enjoy it! i always like slashes
firess 2003-07-27 ch 5,	aww...i like this story, but could u please make a little sign or something showing when ur talking ends and the chapters begin, kinda confusing. hope u write more soon tho!
Shard 2003-07-27 ch 5,	hearts Me loves! The dedication is awesome tear never had something more meaningful said to me! more hearts I like all the "action" is this chapter...grins Nothing I wouldn't do! I think all those "sessions" at your house taught you how to write that stuff good. Need anymore help and we'll glady demonstrate smirks Luv ya Crush ~Shard P.S. you can nscream now.
Deadened World 2003-07-27 ch 1,	I really liked the story's plot, it had very unexpected twists and great characterization. Ch.1 had great similes and overall really nice vocab. It gave a great start to the story and didn't leave the reader wondering. Ch.2 was really cool because you got to see the inside of Jomei's head for the first time. He seemed like a guy who really knew who he was and this chapter gave a light break from the serious tone set by the first ch. It was actually the only chaper i laughed in... i liked the point of view overall and the character really had personality. I found that really unique. I won't comment on ch.3 and 5 because to tell you the truth, i just don't like reading about sexual **, reguardless of sex: boy-boy, girl-girl, girl-guy it doesn't matter and i don't want to critisize what other ppl like writing about. Chapter 4 showed Jomei in a way that again brought a lighter side to the story, humor, and defined the plot just that much more. Jomei was shown to be not so much of a shy guy, but a quick-witted person with determination. It kinda contradicted ch.1 and 2's interpretation of him, but i suppose you're never the same person to yourself as to someone else. If that makes any sense at all i applaude you because i've been trying to figure out how to word it but somehow it still isn't quite there, lol. Overall really good story, but personally i think the sexual stuff really destroyed it for a person like me. It's too bad, i was really looking forward to seeing what was going to happen... Good luck with all of your stories, you both are great authors.

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