God damn it ! *remembers someone she really really cares for witch didn't called in about 4 months and haven't seen in almost 3 years*
I loved the line " I cast a shadow of my hate" , it's just great and the poem is very sensitive.I loved it.

i've been reading a lot of your stuff (since you reviewed me, thanks a lot) and it all seems very dark and yet very beautiful.(just like a black rose) I'm sorry i haven't reviewed any more of your songs but this one really spoke to me because i've felt the exact same way, although I didn't really know how strongly until I read this song. You have great talent. keep it up.

You truly are a talent at the art of poetry, lol! I like the repetitive nature of the poem. It produces a chilling semi-echo (since the words so carefully change at the tips) that runs down the spine... but in a good way. I feel like someone is whispering in my ear or crying on my shoulder and speaking through faint sobs. It's powerful, beautiful, and well-written. I like it.

That was sadly beautiful. Very intense.


~Heart of the Sword

Your really awesome travis! your poems kick **. lol keep up the good work, pal! :-) hehe

o, i really liked this one Travis. soo sad :( but very well written. i love how u write "Your tears run down my face" that was great. everything, from top to bottom in this one was good. despite it being a "love" one, its one of my favs of urs (but it still doesnt top a couple others) it has emotion in it... :( dont b sad!