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| Sydney-J 14 2008-03-13 ch 37,  | abuseon the chapter of the opening night - you wrote chapter 34 and then chapter 36 on the epilogue other than that, the story is really great I smile everytime I read Danny and Dee bits because they seem so sweet and cute together and you know that new song by Chris brown - With You wel that song alwayss reminds me of Danny & Dee. Theres some words in the song that goes with their relationship really good so it could be their song - lol anyway the story was really awesome I really love it |
| DSLuverGurl123 2007-12-16 ch 37, | abuseAWW :) That was a cute ending! -Katherine |
| The Shadows' Sunrise 2007-11-19 ch 37, | abuseLoved it! Great story! Can't believe it ended though. =] Can I have my own personal Danny? lol. Loved it! |
| Evenstar1389 2007-09-07 ch 37, | abuseyay..this story is so nice.. At first between her and Carl was kinda superficial..but it was different with Danny so its very obvious where it's gonna go. It's 1.45am now o.O Really enjoyed the story =p |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-07-22 ch 37, | abuseI think I've fallen in love with your story. If only all guys were like Danny. :P great job. :) |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-07-21 ch 18, | abuseDanny's hotter. :) |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-07-21 ch 9, | abuseI've gotta say that your grammer and writing style has changed throughout the story so far. It's gotten way better - not that it was horrible to begin with. Good job so far. :) |
| moneymakestheworldgoround 2007-07-21 ch 37, | abuseits finished! i LOVED this story. it is AWESOME. :D *adds to faves* yep. AWESOME. :D |
| moneymakestheworldgoround 2007-07-20 ch 28, | abuseaw so cute!! :D love that last paragraph. and that thing when she was arguing with her mum actualy made me cry! T^T |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-07-20 ch 2, | abuseThis actually sounds a lot like A Walk To Remember... |
| moneymakestheworldgoround 2007-07-20 ch 8, | abuselol. go danny! :D is it just me or do i sense a love triangle ... lol. maybe just me. but ah well. i like this story so far. cute. :D |
| ehbnwb 2007-07-05 ch 26, anon. | abuselol I LOVE YOUR WRITING :) It has the right touches of hilarity, wit, romance and just feeling! As much as I love your other story, Honourshill, this is the best choice to just de-stress, from all Dee's lighthearted-ness. So thank you and may you continue writing :p |
| Finwe 2007-03-14 ch 37, | abuseI'm really bad about reviewing every chapter, especially when there are plenty more to read. :) But I figured I had better leave you at least one! hehe... I REALLY liked this story. Gotta say, it was absolutely one of the cutest ones I've ever read. I thought your ending was perfect (I suck at those lol), although, of course I wanted the story to go on for a lot longer! There's one thing I thought I'd mention though. A few of your chapters would end leaving me with the feeling that the next chapter would pick up right about where you left off. Like, Dee never had that chat with her mom, nor did they ever talk after she'd run away. (And, darn it! I wanted to know what she got Danny for Christmas!) I thought all your characters were completely believable, though, and all in all it was QUITE the enjoyable read! Good luck with all future works of art! --Finwe =^.^= |
| Tempest116 2007-02-05 ch 37, | abuseGreat fic, I truly enjoyed the story and loved the main charactters. Danny's sucha sweetheart and Dee is such a kool chic. I love em'. ^_^ |
| deep, deep forest 2007-01-02 ch 37, | abuse;) |