yo.

I love the characters- they act like 12 year olds even when almost turning 18!

I like the ideas and themes in the story- could have expressed them better but really nice anyhow.

I think it would be interesting to see how it turned out if you rewrote it.

That's all I have to say.

Love,
~unsociable

absolutely love this story. totally one of my favourite favourites! its so gorgeously sweet and well written, although there's a few mistakes in your french :P but who cares, half the people can't understand it anyway. but awesome story!

I love the story, keep up the good work.

Ew...that was so...mushy...it was painful...

Dude. It's DULY noted, not dually.

You spelt principal wrong, it's princiPAL, not princiPLE. Very different meanings.

This story is good! Its just that I am from Quebec and the French can be improved...so if you are using an online translator, it is not translating properly and the words are not in the proper order. I would advise you to maybe find someone French( or pretty good at it) to look over your writing. Other than that I love this story!

on the chapter of the opening night - you wrote chapter 34 and then chapter 36 on the epilogue
other than that, the story is really great
I smile everytime I read Danny and Dee bits because they seem so sweet and cute together
and you know that new song by Chris brown - With You
wel that song alwayss reminds me of Danny & Dee.
Theres some words in the song that goes with their relationship really good
so it could be their song - lol
anyway the story was really awesome
I really love it

AWW :) That was a cute ending!

-Katherine

Loved it! Great story! Can't believe it ended though. =] Can I have my own personal Danny? lol. Loved it!

yay..this story is so nice.. At first between her and Carl was kinda superficial..but it was different with Danny so its very obvious where it's gonna go. It's 1.45am now o.O Really enjoyed the story =p

I think I've fallen in love with your story. If only all guys were like Danny. :P great job. :)

Danny's hotter. :)

I've gotta say that your grammer and writing style has changed throughout the story so far. It's gotten way better - not that it was horrible to begin with. Good job so far. :)

its finished! i LOVED this story. it is AWESOME. :D *adds to faves*

yep. AWESOME. :D