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| Shigatsu of the Wood 2003-09-01 ch 1, | pain and bitterness from a searching of comfort? |
| sweetspontaneous 2003-05-27 ch 1, | oh, i -like- this. it is so different to read imagery of taste and touch and smell, instead of sight- and here it is used so effectively- almost choking, in the end. smoke, indeed. |
| cosmo-queen 2003-05-27 ch 1, | Interesting poem. Original and unique. Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |