Reviews for War Freaks and Greeks: The Story of a HalfMortal

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zakei 2007-05-17 ch 2,	abuseLOL?! you know some writer's say that their personality shines through their works, so readers can actually get some insight on how they think and all that load of stuff? i can imagine what kind of a person you are now. runs away but keep writing!
zakei 2007-05-17 ch 1,	abuseomgloliloveit. its so cliched of me. haha. but its a nice start, and its funny. very funny. Eros is a NERD?! hahah. can't imagine. again. lolsy. keep writing!! yes yes, i'm a broken tape recorder. i'd thought you knew it by now. tsky.
Kakerott 2006-08-19 ch 2,	abuseOh my god that was absolutly hileriouse, i loved the whole thing, do more!
lilylupin7 2006-08-12 ch 2,	abuseWow. I love this story. Can you please restart it?
Kleptomaniacal Tendencies 2006-06-16 ch 1,	abuseI do believe I've gone insane for even replying to this, what should I care what you have to say? In all honesty you've made me curious, though you probably think I'm just a silly girl. Yes, I have an email address: thenofacemonster@hotmail.com feel free to email me even though reviewers are probably getting a kick out of our conversation. I do apologize for calling you an **, but it really does bother me when stranger (or older men) call me 'sweetie' or 'baby.'
Sesra 2006-06-13 ch 1,	abuseKratos 12 7h3 god 0f war, n0t aries. amIright?
writergurlLW 2006-06-10 ch 2,	abuseyou just have to continue this crazy story! that line abuot her not closing her legs fast enough was HILARIOUS. i have to save this into my favorites! your story is the first story to get saved into my favorites! it was that good.
The Gobbler 2006-02-02 ch 1,	abuseWoot, this is awesome! Modern takes on Greek mythology are always fun to read. I like the way you explained the gods' passing out of the world, how no one pays attention to them anymore. I also liked Eros, and the sneakers at the end. Great job.
Pheobe Meryll 2005-08-19 ch 2,	abuseThere seems to be a fad with bringing the Greek gods into modern life...as a nerdy Greek myself, I'm occasionally a little purist in these matters...but I couldn't help but laugh at your little twist. The daughter of Ares, about to kill the hapless mortal, stabbed in the back by Eros' arrow! Very nice. The humor, though, is a little over-the-top for me; I think you could have used more refined language especially in chapter one. I realize you are writing from the perspective of the character but it is just a little profane. Otherwise, your grammar is pretty good and your story is nicely orginized. Best luck! PS I hope you don't mind me stating here but Butterfly may be continued soon...so thanks so much for your review!
Jumpin Jellyfish 2005-04-03 ch 2,	abusethat is so cute.
vociferous 2004-12-07 ch 2,	abuseok...this is seriously funny!& so light-hearted!it's totally different from Fox Trail!how on earth did you go from being so dramatic to so funny?!you shouldn't put this on a hiatus!i've always loved stories w/ greek myths & this has great potential!(read night music yet?) pls continue on this too!
darklycute 2004-08-12 ch 2,	abuseI absolutely love it! You have to continue it! Pwease! ~grovels shamelessly~
Cracked Circle 2004-07-16 ch 2, anon.	abuseBlame my name for forcing me to stumble across this story. 0_o "The Circle", eh? Nice. (Cracked Circle, The Circle, yeah yeah.) envious 58 reviews for 2 chapters. It was funny though. cough TAKE IT OFF OF HIATUS. NOW!
DeadSilentSaturn 2004-05-10 ch 2,	abuseOh my gosh! I love this story! Interesting, original, and hilarious. Keep going. Oh, by the way, did I tell you that my dad is none other than Ares, the god of war? Some of my favorite lines: Freak alarm going overdrive! I take it back! I do not feel sad to eat alone! In fact, I love eating alone! just continue looking at me like I’m a goddamn freak and you’ll know soon how a demi-god’s cornea tastes like… Oh, and I love how you refer to your readers as "fellow psychopaths" You know us too well.
DeadSilentSaturn 2004-05-10 ch 1,	abuseGreat ending to 1st chapter. Can't review right now. Too hooked. Reading next chapter.

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