...is there anything you can't do?? Never read such good poetry. Notice that there is a distinct lack of rhythmatic consistancy and rhyming nowadays? (I know I just spelled one of those words wrong... -_-;) MORE POETRY!! It's another one of your many strengths!
O, I LOVE this. It's so cool and... poetic. Yes. A poetic poem. I absolutely love your choice of words, and... just all of it. This is truly great. One of the best things I've read.