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| Meghan Dresner 2003-05-27 ch 1, | This is by far one of the deepest poems that I've read that I can relate to. A lot of my poems tend to revolve around trying to free yourself. If this is your best poem, I can't imagine them getting better. Congradulations on writing a piece of work like this! |
| Et Tu Brute 2003-05-27 ch 1, | totally awesome, the entire thing flows pretty nicely, i like the line 'just fearing the fall' *sigh* so great |