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| Rocky G 2003-12-20 ch 1, | To me this is an armagedon poem. Lot of the lines could have lots of meanings. Like the line "Then our sin-infected Earth" I see it as peoples morales decreasing, more crimes. OR All the things that we have done to destroy the planet. Are not humans the bringers of Death and Darkness. Or Are you writing about another force punishing us for where we have brought the world. Great poem One that I will for sure have to put on my favorites list. :) |
| areotwilight 2003-08-23 ch 1, | ::is stuffing face with potato chips:: what?! i didnt review this one EITHER?! okay, i LOVE the title for this one. i also like the last lines about the darkness and haze choking out the last of the living... mwahaha, it's so cool! why don't you write poetry any more...? it's all stories with you, isn't it!! don't make me get the spoons, you seriously should write more poetry! lol! |
| Megan 2003-06-30 ch 1, | this one is a little wierd. is almost all you poems about darkness? heh its ok though hey maybe i will call you laterz ok ttyl bye |
| Valerie 2003-06-27 ch 1, | I like that one to. But I still love you more! :D |
| Miamouse 2003-05-27 ch 1, | I like this, it's very solid and there's thought behind it. However, the topic has been done before, so to make it more origina; you need fresh vocab and innovative phrases, although saying that some of your lines are very good. Mia :) |