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| Manju 2005-08-23 ch 1,   | nice one. scary. lol. |
| nicole 2003-07-29 ch 1, | hey, this one was really good too. you're good at poetry!! wtf, keep writing it, okay? you're only gonna get better, lol! i wanna see more! |
| Megan 2003-06-30 ch 1, | this one is alot better then the one i just read, and at least you didnt repeat yourself over and over agian. i wish i could write ** like this you know that well i will read the next thing and let you know what i think ok lol onword |
| Valerie 2003-06-27 ch 1, | Wow! I think thats all I can say right now. Its really good! |
| Miamouse 2003-05-27 ch 1, | the topic has been done, but you delt with it well. One bit of criticsm I have is the ending, it just doesn't seem strong enough to end a poem with this theme, in my hmble opinion. Otherwise, very good, I like the descent from the sun into the darkness, that's clever. Mia :) |