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| Manju 2005-08-23 ch 1,   | oh man, good job. i can relate a bit. |
| areotwilight 2003-08-23 ch 1, | OOPS, i thought i reviewed this already, but i DIDN'T, so here goes; it's kinda cool the format u used, i like it! with repeating "all this pain" at the begining of each line and all. haha, and it rhymes! (^_^) good job! |
| Megan 2003-06-30 ch 1, | hey travis your poems are not that bad better then some of the ** i write you know. and well other then you repeat yourself this poem isnt that bad you couldve made it alittle longer, other then that i like |
| Vallerie 2003-06-27 ch 1, | TRAVIS UR DA BEST!! I LOVE YOU!! |