amazingly well, amazing!! ::too tired and dead from lack of caffine to think of more advanced vocabulary:: shaddup. anyway...i don't know...this is sort of depressing, mysti...::eyes you suspiciously...: it borders on angst! ah well, you're right, this is beautiful. indescribably lovely, as usual...great job. this so has to go on my favorites...^^ anyway, spifferlicious...mehhehehehe...::laughing randomly in her drugged way:: ugh...

short and to the point. VERY to the point. but it explains so much that I can't complain about it being short.

Cool poem. The words really spoke out and I really liked the lines "A semblence of normal, A shadow of real". They gave a good flow to the poem.