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| All Mighty Terrestrial 2004-01-13 ch 1, | Definitely heavy on the symbolism. Two people from different worlds, no matter who travels to be with who the other will have to adapt to "fit in", and they'll lose what made them beautiful in the first place. (sigh) Makes it hard to be yourself. Poetry format great way of expressing it. Good job. |
| firess 2003-06-21 ch 1, | wow. idk wat else 2 say. |
| Kyalia 2003-05-30 ch 1, | You always want what you can't have-- great parable-stuff. |
| Spector'sGirl 2003-05-29 ch 1, | I like the whole does he love me or my flight thing. And the repition couldn't wouldn't is ok, but it's on that fine line of just enough and too much, so just be careful with it. |