Reviews for Footprints of Neptune

Reviews For: Footprints of Neptune

Violet Blues 2004-04-09 ch 1,	Wonderful! You're a brilliant poet!
mmoonsshiner 2004-01-19 ch 1,	wow hon that was beautiful ^^... did i say hon? -_-* ne ways since u seem so insecure about people judging ur religion id just like to let you know that as a buddhist i have nothing but respect for u and as a human we're really too oblivious to care.but ur a great poet and thats all that matters .Great job. ~Nat
JJR Meerraf 2003-11-22 ch 1,	Great stuff! I love your imagery! It was magnificent, and marvelous. Just beautfiul work! Keep it up!
Werecat99 2003-08-19 ch 1,	That was absolutely beautiful! And a very powerful image you have painted.
Garrett C 2003-07-12 ch 1,	I can call this close to perfect but for a single line: "In raindrop tears and ocean years she longs to hold your hand." You see, this final line is perfect. I regret that I know nothing of the significance of the planets in much philosphy, myth, or other area that might help me to truly understand this poem. My only critique, which may be the fault of my own ignorance on the subject is that there is the shade of declaration in some of the lines of this poem, a poem that seems much more created to proudly display the unique images and their significance with a wonderous point of view rather than a factual one.I guess the layman way to say this is that at times in the body of the poem, it felt a little stiff when it is so good and so obviously meant to be loose. If you take this to heart, look to the final line for inspiration toward improvement. If you see my advice as bad or wrong, truly I wish you to ignore it for what, then, it will is not worth. There is a true beauty here, though, and I can always admire beauty.
Salim Narek 2003-07-08 ch 1,	Sigh... so beautiful. I wouldn't change a thing.
Kyalia 2003-05-30 ch 1,	Beautiful images there... calm feeling.

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