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Reviews For: The Black Heart Bleeds Red

Eleena Thea
2003-11-25
ch 2,
That is a fabulus piece of verse you have there. It has a very simplistic yet beuatiful structure that allows it to flow well. Ver personal. I love first person views on ones internal emotions. It is personal and easy to relate to. Wonderful job!
Stormyfirefly2
2003-06-05
ch 11,
this is deep and really intense. hope you make it thru your ruff times.
Stormyfirefly2
2003-06-05
ch 6,
i really like this one.
Stormyfirefly2
2003-06-05
ch 5,
nice
Stormyfirefly2
2003-06-05
ch 2,
nice. Really nice, chec mine out sometime?
Meghan Dresner
2003-06-01
ch 3,
This is a good poem. It is respect when someone lets you cry without bothering you. I don't think it really hurts if they don't ask, although people think it does. I like the last two lines the best. Good job!
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