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| Eleena Thea 2003-11-25 ch 2, | That is a fabulus piece of verse you have there. It has a very simplistic yet beuatiful structure that allows it to flow well. Ver personal. I love first person views on ones internal emotions. It is personal and easy to relate to. Wonderful job! |
| Stormyfirefly2 2003-06-05 ch 11, | this is deep and really intense. hope you make it thru your ruff times. |
| Stormyfirefly2 2003-06-05 ch 6, | i really like this one. |
| Stormyfirefly2 2003-06-05 ch 5, | nice |
| Stormyfirefly2 2003-06-05 ch 2, | nice. Really nice, chec mine out sometime? |
| Meghan Dresner 2003-06-01 ch 3, | This is a good poem. It is respect when someone lets you cry without bothering you. I don't think it really hurts if they don't ask, although people think it does. I like the last two lines the best. Good job! |