 Anjeni Windsinger 2003-08-08 . chapter 1Beautifully written poem. I love it, it's awesome.
Keep writing. |
 The Ruin 2003-07-03 . chapter 1This is excellent. I particularly like the imagery in the first four lines - I was always one for poetic descriptions such as this. I also like the way it's written: I can never seem to make non-rhyming poems work but this works really well. And the imagery and symbolism throughout are very effective. It's a very captivating and attention grabbing poem altogether. Good job! |
 Kesshi Mashin 2003-06-13 . chapter 1I like this. Very nice. Keep on writin... |
 Solfires Shadow 2003-06-10 . chapter 1Hmhm o i do like this poem. I like it very much. Its name alone cetches my attention. Its a well written poem, holding purity, death, nature, and evil. Wonderful peom, i did enjoy it.
-S.S |
 Jadarendir 2003-05-29 . chapter 1oh my sweet Jesus this is in my own image! how do you DO it?! its like you're me, only female and a better writer! |
 DefianceIsMe 2003-05-28 . chapter 1This was very well written. Blood on white has always symbolized sacrifice so the word tribute at the end fits very well. Actually this is overflowing with symbolism. Great job. ^_^ |