COOL...write more!

u need to write more, it was really good

seems 2 me u found wat u were lookin 4 hehe. NJ oh moon of the elements (lol?!?) its great! (explain me later why it kinda doesnt feel like all..i duno wat it was..nvm) Btw, Meet u In Kyoto when CN decides lol. Go K!
MercenarySegma...haha im a moron.

COL! lol...sorry it was just really good. I got a little carried away there. Good work my friend.

-Aragorn1

Chickie...All I've gotta say is you best be getting more up to these stories...I want more to beta, demmit! *g*

Cheers,
Pet

I've only got one word ... HOLY CRAP! Veery good, love the plot Elemental Moon ^^ Keep up the great work! (...Why do I sound like my English teacher...? o.O)
~.:|Yami Kunoichi|:.~

That is a great story. I really like it. Very good on describing the characters. Keep going!! You have talent!!

This is such a cool story . Update soon!
-Destn Scar

wooho!
more more more!
stop wat u r doin and write!
woohoo!
( u wanted an idea rite..IM me and ask..)
Slade

Good story...last chapter left me hanging but this was and excellent finisher.

I didn't expect the next chapter out so soon! ^^ Anyway ... I like how this is going. Karel is a jerk! Maybe he's been by himself too long ... good chapter! I can't wait for the next one!

Who's the new guy?? Is he the shop-owner ...? The story is going somewhere! ^^ I liked the beginning of the chapter ... I'll be looking for more soon! ^^

That was awesome! Kinda weird for me though...considering it's not my style.

start the story soon please! PS-R/R my fic please!

Later Dayz-

Thanks for the info! ^^ I know how you feel, when you just don't feel like writing a chapter ... but I can't do that. ^^; You read Shonen Jump?? I love SJ! Well, I have to go ... I'll be waiting for the next chapter!