| Reviews for Camera Cruelty |
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Tzotel431 6/29/05 . chapter 1really to the point, you don't want the picture to be taken, but, now i am no one to tell you how to write your poetry, you could expand, where is the picture being taken at, who is taking it, why don't you want it taken, you know details. |
reader 12/7/04 . chapter 1 hahah! |
chairmanmeow 8/1/03 . chapter 1Strange? Yes. I find it kind of funny too. Great job on the haiku. |
joie 610 7/18/03 . chapter 1haha, very cute! i've felt the camera's cruelty many times &( your poem really "captures" the essence of a surprise picture ;) or, well, any kind of picture. nicely written! |
crystal 6/6/03 . chapter 1 Hehehe, descriptive. Can imagine u trying to get away from the camera! |
CoolBeans18s 5/30/03 . chapter 1I have no idea why, but I just laughed! Wonderful poem! CoolBeans18s |
Keep it 100 5/29/03 . chapter 1Heh. I know that feeling. Heart of the Sword |
Tiefling 5/29/03 . chapter 1Cool. Nice last line. |
kamikaze899 5/28/03 . chapter 1hehe.. nice one! good job, keep writing |