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| breakdown in the waiting ro... 2004-03-28 ch 1,   | "But today you are a neither nor So what exactly are you waiting for." Great lines. I see some of my own insecurities in this, and then some of my problems with others. Amusing and of course true. -Jessica |
| firehoney 2004-02-01 ch 1, | Oh God, this is brilliant. I know lots of people like that and I've never known how to put what they do into words, you just done that for me, thank you. I love this! |
| perkha 2004-01-22 ch 1, | this is an awsome poem just like my thoughts |
| imxnotxyourxstar 2004-01-11 ch 1, | Great poem...I can definitely relate. |
| the cereal killer 2003-10-07 ch 1, | It's good writing about emotions when you actually feel it for real. It doesn't come off as shallow or fake that way. (: |
| Teresz 2003-08-31 ch 1, | hmm. the anger flows fluently through...I must say, of all of your poems that I have read this is my least favorite, but it is still very well written. |
| Angerona 2003-08-15 ch 1, | o mest up and angry i like it. I have had moments like this. I tell my self to shut the ** up all the time. LOL twas a pun i could not help. ANY HOW! I like this. It feels like it's from the deep and twisted bouels of your mind. The anger seems to..untainted it that makes sence pure anger. Almost as if it's justifyed anger at your self. Which frankyly i have never herd of, but there is a first time for everything! Horray with this sorry to cut it short...well as short as my reviews get! :D ~Angerona the Goddes of DEath~ |
| Kittle 2003-08-15 ch 1, | Great job, wonderful description, amazing |
| KayWest 2003-08-13 ch 1, | What can I say but Rock On (even though I despise that phrase). I love to borrow this, if I have your permission. So many people I know need to open their eyes, and you spell it out just the right way. ~KayWest |
| Yaquel Visain 2003-07-29 ch 1, | I love the title ^_^! I can relate to this poem. Some of these ** need to take their heads out of their asses and look around. Nice Poem. |
| Grendel 2003-07-17 ch 1, | What Anger! Nice going... |
| emem 2003-07-15 ch 1, | Yeah, I think everyone can relate, some people are so...closed to different ideas. Good poem. -Emma |
| suicidel angel 2003-07-10 ch 1, | it doesn't remind me off anyone exactly, but some parts are a perfect description of someone i know.it's an excellent poem! |
| Imoen 2003-07-03 ch 1, | I can relate completly to this poem. I really liked the way you worded things in it. This was bloody well written! |
| Lux's Confusion 2003-06-04 ch 1, | i feel like being a total ** and say what the others don't. this poem reminded me of myself. i tip my hat to you sweet heart. here's to the two honest people on this ** earth. cheers! Jasmine |