Reviews for A quiet afternoon on the river

Incubabe 2003-07-16 ch 1,	Aw... this was so nice to read. I know that sounds really "cop-out" like but it was nice. I liked it a lot. Diana x
Lux's Confusion 2003-06-17 ch 2,	holy **. loved the two perspectives, adds a sense of mystery. i thought a lot of elements in this were very symbolic and it's so true when you said we see the same things differently. I believe that quest of life is namely to capture anothers love, but also to share the mind and perspective. weird i know, but i like how you demanded the attention that it cannot happen. ok i'll shut up now. Jasmine
Cuba 2003-05-29 ch 2,	Muah ha ha ha ha ha ha!! Very nice! Deeply enjoyed this, need to show it to a few people who think they're all that on t' river, methinks. Write one for the dance floor and I can think of a few guys who we could use that on too. Anyway, glad to see you're hard at work! Keep it up!
estrellas 2003-05-29 ch 2,	i love it totally. awesome title, awesome everything. very nice rebuttle but "her story". its' just a good piece. toatly not what i expected when i set out to read this. btw, i love the old-english type writing, you use it tastefully and it adds to the writing. kudos!