 Instant Ninja 2005-07-03 . chapter 1...absolutely amazing... |
 blackeyes 2004-04-18 . chapter 1lol! |
 Queen of the Dust Bunnies 2003-12-21 . chapter 1 Very clever--the last ilne gave me the giggels! Good job! Many many kudos! |
 FlyingPhish 2003-08-06 . chapter 1haha way amusing. Good job on this spoof of the bible story. |
 Jules9588 2003-05-30 . chapter 1Er...clever, I'll give it that. I have noticed a few things, however:
You spelled "principal" wrong.
I have never heard of the devil getting punished.
~~So, I think I liked it...no wait, I did. |
 traditionalevolution 2003-05-30 . chapter 1Short, funny, simple.
I like it. Maybe add some set descriptions.
I don't know if your school does preformance nights but you should show it to the drama teacher at your school. Unless you did it for drama in the first place.
I really do envy the simplicity. |
 green*jade*swallow 2003-05-29 . chapter 1hmm. sounds familar. great job. I thought it was real funny and cute. |
 Angele 2003-05-29 . chapter 1 This was funny, I enjoyed it. But did you spell principal wrong on purpose? |
 Sam 2003-05-29 . chapter 1 *Snickers* That's amusing. |
 Sanie-Chez 2003-05-29 . chapter 1Princaple is really spelled principal try to change it plez
Its cute though
keep working
good job |