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Reviews For: The Forbidden Fruit Basket
Instant Ninja 2005-07-03 . chapter 1
...absolutely amazing...
blackeyes 2004-04-18 . chapter 1
lol!
Queen of the Dust Bunnies 2003-12-21 . chapter 1
Very clever--the last ilne gave me the giggels! Good job! Many many kudos!
FlyingPhish 2003-08-06 . chapter 1
haha way amusing. Good job on this spoof of the bible story.
Jules9588 2003-05-30 . chapter 1
Er...clever, I'll give it that. I have noticed a few things, however:

You spelled "principal" wrong.

I have never heard of the devil getting punished.

~~So, I think I liked it...no wait, I did.
traditionalevolution 2003-05-30 . chapter 1
Short, funny, simple.

I like it. Maybe add some set descriptions.

I don't know if your school does preformance nights but you should show it to the drama teacher at your school. Unless you did it for drama in the first place.

I really do envy the simplicity.
green*jade*swallow 2003-05-29 . chapter 1
hmm. sounds familar. great job. I thought it was real funny and cute.
Angele 2003-05-29 . chapter 1
This was funny, I enjoyed it. But did you spell principal wrong on purpose?
Sam 2003-05-29 . chapter 1
*Snickers* That's amusing.
Sanie-Chez 2003-05-29 . chapter 1
Princaple is really spelled principal try to change it plez


Its cute though


keep working
good job
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