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| hypocrite extrodinare 2005-03-18 ch 1,   | OMG!! it so prettyful! excuse the childeshness but its really good! I write poems too, but Im afraid to put them up on the site cuz they are all suicidal and crap... but yea I liked the poem! |
| Gercian 2003-12-01 ch 1, | meh... yea.. work on ryhming.. or just dont ryhme.. if there is anything worse then a poem that ryhmes and then doesnt its a poem that isnt meant to ryhme but the person trys anyway... write what comes to ur mind.. write ur heart! |
| UndiscoveredOtherkin 2003-10-15 ch 1, | I've been through this conversation before, except the girls and the boys position was reversed...anyways, I really liked it. Good work. |
| Shadafakup 2003-07-09 ch 1, | It doesnt suck.. Its not that fantastic but it really doesnt suck.. Its pretty good, esp if its your first time trying.. Its good.. I think it flow very well.. Like a song from a musical or somethin.. Good job.. Write more.. |
| lainxauber 2003-07-01 ch 1, | Don't say it sucks, I liked it. If you were expressing an emotion you were feeling at the time, it's poetry worth reading. |
| Strawberry Chapstick 2003-06-13 ch 1, | I like this. And it's true to life. Guys do go back on what they said... Only for it to happen again. I like the whole conversation thing. Good poem ^_^ |
| baibiivenus 2003-06-11 ch 1, | i loved your poem! its so real to my life. Its wonderful! also i love the poem in your profile |
| Foxlair 2003-06-07 ch 1, | Oh, it doesn't suck. I really liked the conversation idea behind it... some of the rhymes seem kinda forced, but if you gave the poem a definite meter they would probably flow better. Anyway, just a suggestion. Keep writing! |
| All Midnight Eyes 2003-06-06 ch 1, | ^_^ I like your poem alot. It's sad, the way the boy keeps protesting that he didn't mean it and the girl refuses to listen to him...*sigh* Oh well. Good job! |
| Aftertaste of a Razorblade 2003-06-04 ch 1, | This is great poem. Shame on you for thinking otherwise! Trust me, you rhyne better than I do ;) |
| Soupaflyyy 2003-05-31 ch 1, | I liked it. The conversation form is a pretty unique idea. good job! |