It was a really good song, but there is no homebase that you con retreat back to. What I mean is, no chorus. Other than that it was really good.

Go you. That was great! Keep it up!

Princess Mei

Great wording.I also love the idea that you are against the title of many people yearn for that title their whole life fighting for it-yet in reality it's something that is seem to feel angst about it,ditto here!

Loved it.

Justin