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| Chagan 2003-09-21 ch 1,   | Hey dude! Found ur stuff from ur review of Edge of the Storm. I like this one's plot, its got a killer thing going for it. I was a little confused tho- At one point they say going back to land is suicide cuz the radiation will kill em. On the other hand, they're leated when they find land nearby. Otherwise good stuff man! Keep it up! |
| furry creature 2003-06-01 ch 1, | thats intriguing...i hope you continue this, i want to see how the crew react. it reminds me of the film 'hole' anyways, good writing, keep it up! |
| Give it a Swirl 2003-05-30 ch 1, | Oh. Creepy. Yah. I love watching movies where they show the Earth dead. Woo! But that's just me. I liked this. Good job. |
| Justin-Mullins 2003-05-29 ch 1, | Nice story. I enjoyed it, though I only noticed one mistake in it. In the fifth paragraph, first sentence, I think it should be "morale" instead of "moral". |