Nice imagery...truly touching like all of ur stuff

Again, another amazing new way to view things. Your work is very inspiring and thought-provoking and above all written in the best possible way.

One word came to mind...dang. The shatering of your body was very good, i could see that. I love this poem.

Wow, that was beautiful. The rhythm was very nice and I like that title-it suited the poem. Well done.

Dude is this for one of you characters?ordid some 'bleep' make you feel this way?with that aside ...Beautiful imagery and I could really see it...anyway... You should read adn review my two poems The rose and I am...hehehehe

Lovely in a dark morbid kind of way. Very nice imagery.