This is deep. I love it!

Nice poem. Your emotion and passion is evident and constant throughout the piece. Nice work.

-Ravana

Wow...this is harsh and sad but a very good poem, as you described what you've been through. Very good.

~~Trinity

Theres something perfectly simlistic about this-in a really good way. Something that means alot that is really simply put. I like it.

I wanted to cry reading this (and your story Wallflower!) because it is so close to what I've gone through, how I've felt.

I have no talent in poetry whatsoever so to me this is amazing.

Life is a roller coaster. It has it's ups and downs, and generally there is more down than up... not exactly the best quote to explain life, but it's fair enough.

Excellent poem. It captures your emotions very well.
Remember, the night fades into the day...

Neat, it's very reflective. I love that 3rd stanza. It's a different view than most people take to failure. I like it. Nice work. but remember, as one of my charcter says "The good comes from the worst."

*cries* I know!! I'm having a lotta bad luck lately, it's OK *hugs*