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Reviews For: Falling Once Again

infamousredink09
2006-04-12
ch 1,
abuseThis is deep. I love it!
Ravana Night
2006-03-19
ch 1,
abuseNice poem. Your emotion and passion is evident and constant throughout the piece. Nice work.

-Ravana
les petits bateaux
2005-11-11
ch 1,
abuseWow...this is harsh and sad but a very good poem, as you described what you've been through. Very good.

~~Trinity
Chitose
2005-09-17
ch 1,
abuseTheres something perfectly simlistic about this-in a really good way. Something that means alot that is really simply put. I like it.
Elf Diaper
2004-06-26
ch 1,
abuseI wanted to cry reading this (and your story Wallflower!) because it is so close to what I've gone through, how I've felt.
Well-Worn-Chaos
2004-05-15
ch 1,
abuseI have no talent in poetry whatsoever so to me this is amazing.
OOIA
2004-02-12
ch 1,
abuseLife is a roller coaster. It has it's ups and downs, and generally there is more down than up... not exactly the best quote to explain life, but it's fair enough.
CassieMR
2004-01-23
ch 1,
abuseExcellent poem. It captures your emotions very well.
Remember, the night fades into the day...
Teresz
2003-06-06
ch 1,
abuseNeat, it's very reflective. I love that 3rd stanza. It's a different view than most people take to failure. I like it. Nice work. but remember, as one of my charcter says "The good comes from the worst."
Penname wa Silver B
2003-06-06
ch 1,
abuse*cries* I know!! I'm having a lotta bad luck lately, it's OK *hugs*
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