 infamousredink09 2006-04-12 . chapter 1This is deep. I love it! |
 Ravana Night 2006-03-19 . chapter 1Nice poem. Your emotion and passion is evident and constant throughout the piece. Nice work.
-Ravana |
 les petits bateaux 2005-11-11 . chapter 1Wow...this is harsh and sad but a very good poem, as you described what you've been through. Very good.
~~Trinity |
 Chitose 2005-09-17 . chapter 1Theres something perfectly simlistic about this-in a really good way. Something that means alot that is really simply put. I like it. |
 Elf Diaper 2004-06-26 . chapter 1I wanted to cry reading this (and your story Wallflower!) because it is so close to what I've gone through, how I've felt. |
 Well-Worn-Chaos 2004-05-15 . chapter 1I have no talent in poetry whatsoever so to me this is amazing. |
 OOIA 2004-02-12 . chapter 1Life is a roller coaster. It has it's ups and downs, and generally there is more down than up... not exactly the best quote to explain life, but it's fair enough. |
 CassieMR 2004-01-23 . chapter 1Excellent poem. It captures your emotions very well.
Remember, the night fades into the day... |
 Teresz 2003-06-06 . chapter 1Neat, it's very reflective. I love that 3rd stanza. It's a different view than most people take to failure. I like it. Nice work. but remember, as one of my charcter says "The good comes from the worst." |
 Penname wa Silver B 2003-06-06 . chapter 1*cries* I know!! I'm having a lotta bad luck lately, it's OK *hugs* |