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| infamousredink09 2006-04-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is deep. I love it! |
| Ravana Night 2006-03-19 ch 1, | abuseNice poem. Your emotion and passion is evident and constant throughout the piece. Nice work. -Ravana |
| les petits bateaux 2005-11-11 ch 1, | abuseWow...this is harsh and sad but a very good poem, as you described what you've been through. Very good. ~~Trinity |
| Chitose 2005-09-17 ch 1, | abuseTheres something perfectly simlistic about this-in a really good way. Something that means alot that is really simply put. I like it. |
| Elf Diaper 2004-06-26 ch 1, | abuseI wanted to cry reading this (and your story Wallflower!) because it is so close to what I've gone through, how I've felt. |
| Well-Worn-Chaos 2004-05-15 ch 1, | abuseI have no talent in poetry whatsoever so to me this is amazing. |
| OOIA 2004-02-12 ch 1, | abuseLife is a roller coaster. It has it's ups and downs, and generally there is more down than up... not exactly the best quote to explain life, but it's fair enough. |
| CassieMR 2004-01-23 ch 1, | abuseExcellent poem. It captures your emotions very well. Remember, the night fades into the day... |
| Teresz 2003-06-06 ch 1, | abuseNeat, it's very reflective. I love that 3rd stanza. It's a different view than most people take to failure. I like it. Nice work. but remember, as one of my charcter says "The good comes from the worst." |
| Penname wa Silver B 2003-06-06 ch 1, | abuse*cries* I know!! I'm having a lotta bad luck lately, it's OK *hugs* |