Lovely. You manage to get across so many of the countless aspects of the beauty of Jesus. This is powerful, and he really seems to have anointed you with a great gift of writing as well as insight into his love.
Good job, keep writing for him! :-)
Love,
* Eirien

Very touching. It takes a lot of strength to be a soldier... and a lot of indifference to force this reality on someone.

Very true! Down with stereotypes!

Very good, very noble, true, coragious in a way, I don't know... it was just a truly excellent poem.

The explanation was funny. Tell your bro that he did a good job!

I'm sorry you had a bad day :(. It inspired a heart felt and exquisite poem though! Wonderful!

Ack! I feel terrible! Here you are giving me the most reviews I've had in my life! Maybe three times as more! And I haven't reviewed you for what seems like forever and a day! I'm SO sorry! I've been so busy!
The poem made sense to me, and as always it was excellent! I loved it!

This is the... third maybe storm poem, but it never gets old, it's a wonderful subject and you do it masterfully each time. I loved it! It's wonderful!
P.S.
Thanks for so many reviews! I truly consider myself blessed to know you and be able to read your work. I feel blessed and just... wonderful with all your reviews, that KEEP coming in! You're a great friend! Thank you!

An excellent way to end it. Wonderful!

This is very good! I've gone through some tough times just recently and thinking like that and talking to God has really helped me out. It just brought back a very good point that we all need to rmemeber. Marvelous work!

Great stuff, I love eclilpses. Beautiful

Very sad, but wonderfully written

Oh! I love that song! It's like one of the greatest songs! Meant To Live by Switchfoot was excellent also! I love the guitar! sorry, but music and writing are my only release in this world, and when I get started it's hard to stop.
I loved the repatition. And though it was similar to the song it was also unique in its own way. A wonderful piece of writing.

Excellent, wonderful, beautiful. I loved the very beginning, and the rest of the haiku was marvelous also! I like some of Third Days songs, I usually like more hard rock sort of stuff, but still an excellent place to find insp0iration. I loved it!

Very cool! Maybe one of my favorites. I loved how you pointed out that you're going on an adventure but it also means leaving your comfort zone. Wonderful stuff! Again! Please don't get annoyed at hearing that :), it's just true! Beautiful!