FictionPress.com - let the words flow
| FictionPress.com - let the words flow |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| Secretive 2006-02-20 ch 1,  | abuseWow, this was beautiful. So intense... I love this, you are an excellent poet! |
| ShadowNemesis 2005-07-09 ch 1, | abusePowerful. I like the repetition of the image of the house and the mouse; very effective. I also really liked the last three lines - awesome way to finish up the poem. -ShadowNemesis |
| adrian 2004-07-19 ch 1, anon. | abusegood poem, sad, i am impressed with your skills |
| Siberia1 2004-02-22 ch 1, | abuse*tear* Oh man, that was intense. I felt so much pain the end. Powerful poem. |
| Mandrake-CoRn 2003-05-31 ch 1, | abuseI really really liked it! The story is so sad though :(. But the rhyming was excellent, I really like how you ended it, and it's so true! |