Couple shivers down my spine..I got this creepy vibe. Good work! I can't get enough of your stuff!

pretty pink:)

wow. You have so much talent. It's very hard to write good poetry that's both not of a positive nature, like this poem, and not whiny, but you did it, and you did it very well. You're on my favorite authors list now, for this poem and for "Its what I can feel"

i agree, it was beautiful, so much imagery and extremely well written

That was beautiful... and really sad. Kinda creepy, too. It was also, as you said, very tricky. I read it 3 times, and I still don't think I FULLY understand it. So Kudos to you, my friend. Pat yourself on the back for making me stare ahead with a confused look on my face for a full five minutes. I didn't see myself, but I bet it was hilarious! :)

quite a creepy feel to it! cool poem, keep up the good work