I loved how sensual and sexy this was without really showing anything sexual. The detail you used was very stering. I really enjoyed it. A wonderful piece full of passion. Keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.

Whoa. That's deep. And awesome.

I like the subject matter but I would re-format it for better poetic flow. The wording is good but rearranged it could make it more whole.
nchan

i don't know why.. but i love the stuff you write... you're very deep and real... none of that crap other people spew... you're definatly on my favorite's list... please keep making these...

Again, too lazy...
I read this befoer in your journal. I have to say I know what you're talking about... I've had strange dreams lately. I've loved the creations of my own mind. they aren't real, but my feelings are. God, I'm such a maniac... I think I may be mental. But at least I'm in good company. dreams shouldn't impact real life. Or maybe they should...
Again, brava.

ooh. I like this. Very sinister, very surreal. I especially like the line "Strange smile, cocked hat, and danger on his breath". danger on his breath... shudderingly ingenious. darling, you've struck gold.
I knew a Jonas once. But he was very unlike this one, I think.

Another work of art. Why am I not surprised? ^_^ Lovely as usual. You're so lucky. I can only clearly remember three or four dreams that I ever had.