Beautiful, sweet ending to this poem. The emotions were portrayed very clearly and I like your use of personification. It makes the poem come alive. Great! :)

that is a gorgeous piece of poetry, the best i have ever read on the site. you really are a romantic poet, and can do what few others on Fictionpress can. again, what a lovely piece of work. your language is exquisite - reminds me of Ozmandias by - shelly, or keats, or someone like that. You are a very gifted poet - cherish it and write more, please!

what can i say? wow . incredible vocabulary, incredible rhyme scheme, rythm, its amazing. i love some of the language, its great.
if you find time please come and read some of my stuff, id apreciate reviews from someone who writes like this.

this was too beautiful!! sigh...

This is a great poem, one of the best I have ever read. I think i is alot better than any of mine. ou should get it published.