good idear cud be a lital longer but not bad

beautifully done... i luved it...
awesome
~Anesta

Interesting, It sort of reminds me of how the 8th graders did the scene symbolizing the destruction of the cemetary. weird but cool.

bex, this is wonderful! I love the fact that you are talking about memories and the way someone perceives life. I beleive that the person has gone blind, but i am not perfectly certain. you had me scrolling no stop because it caught me. Really spectacular! Will you someday give me a copy of all of your writing. I promise not to share. I just beleive that you have a talent that i realy crave! I love you. Great job.