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Reviews For: Maybe Wren doesn't have to leave

vixxy
2003-07-14
ch 1,
abuseexcellent. i can relate so much to this. did u write this about yourself?
Just Wolf
2003-06-07
ch 1,
abuseI loved your description, esp "weird looking flower." that was amazing, beautiful .it was very cool. it rerminded me a little of Francesce Lia Block. have you ever read her? you might like her. It was a really great really sweet character sketch, very delicate, like a little orchid, just bloomed and ready to die...
(also, i know i say this every time, but THANK YOU so much for your reviews. i do really, really appreciate them, i mean it!)
Vuelo
2003-06-07
ch 1,
abuseHey Thnx for the reveiw on Tanlined girl... yeah its pretty different for me i'll say that much lol.
Uhm, i liked this alot. i know the feeling but at the same time it's almost like, supernatural. I get these realistic pictures in my head and then i have this fantastic unreal image. It's really bizare but extremely down to earth. it's a really good mix, and i like it a LOT! Good job, keep writing.
Queen of Spades
2003-06-03
ch 1,
abusePretty good, I think you could have broken the paragraph up more to help fit the "music" of it. (My english teacher would be so proud I learned something eek!)then again I'm a little too happy to push the "tab" button...you did a really good job :)
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